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Fargrimmer

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Giving this a full rating just because of how hard I laughed at the end! It was a pretty hard laugh, trust me.

That was really short. I didn't like how you used the same drawing of the cathedral three times.
Cain using a puppet and the fall-gag were pretty funny. I see a lot of potential for growth and I would love to see you grow as an animator.

Zs-Animations responds:

Thank you :D

The animation was okay, it would be better if characters emoted more and were more distinct from each other in more ways than just color, and ultimately it doesn't add anything and the whole thing takes place in the same scene so it would literally be better to watch the original that the audio came from.

For your first time the animation was pretty good, I can easily see you put a lot of effort into this. It is kind of obvious that you're not fluent in Japanese so you might consider dropping that.
The backgrounds could be better.
Just keep at it and you might make something that ends up on the front page!

It's nice to see some stop-motion on this site for a change. Hope you keep this up and improve.

Pacing was slow, there's a watermark in the center of the video for the whole duration, for the amount of things that actually happen in this video it is actually too long, there were no sound-effects or any other sound apart from the voices, the voices were text-to-speech.

You really should take the time to learn to use a proper animation-tool instead of Vyond.
I know it might seem difficult, but the time you'll put into it will be worth it by the end.

This is one of the smoothest animations I have seen on this site. Instant fave, follow and 5 stars!

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